“Please”, a whisper escaped through pain!
I continue to struggle and yet try harder to work on this challenge by Shweta. I absolutely love wracking my brain over this. After hours of struggle, I came up with above and the prompt was the word beg which I am not sure is understandable from what I have written! Looking forward to a constructive feedback 🙂
You did very well!
Numbness grows from the centralized pain.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Amazingly written, my friend!!! I love this one, you captured such emotion and power in a few words!! Well done 🖤🖤
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Thank you so much, Ace! So sweet of you to shower me with such kind words ❤❤ this is something very new for me so I am learning!
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Oh, wow, Pooja. You did a marvelous job. That’s an excellent take on the prompt. You absolutely nailed it!
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I am so glad you think so!! I wanted to do another one but just could not fit it into 6 words!
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It happens at times. 🙂
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[…] By Pooja at Love all or perish: “Please”, a whisper escaped through pain! […]
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Yay!!! 😍
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how do you get such ideas..please teach me 😍
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Try and try…
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well done!!! but one should not have to struggle. but it paid off for you. but, like the old saying…”if it was easy, everyone would be doing it.”
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It’s not easy, at all, to fit your thoughts into 6 words. The idea is not the problem, construction is! 🙂
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🙂
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I agree with everyone else, beautiful, Pooja. Well done! ❤
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Thank you Jeff! You are the best 🙂
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You’re welcome, Pooja. Always! Awe, that is so kind, thank you!! 🤗
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Good one- although now I’m curious about what caused the pain!
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So the idea was this is a patient begging for death due to immense pain! But I felt that’d be too dark so kept it general!
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Wow that is kind of dark but I think that would make an interesting story. Great job!
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A wonderful 6WS Pooja! ❤️
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Thank you!!! Learning, so glad to have come across you via this 🙂
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