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Mix of hues, beautiful and soothing,
Talk to me of love, talk to me of me,
Love paints the sky anew each evening,
Curiosity hits and mixes with desire to flee.
Is it real or is it all a dream?
The glory, the beauty and the calm,
Heart is full yet mind is blank it seems,
Oh sunset, perhaps that’s your charm.
They ask, tell me what’s love,
Unknown to the wonders the clouds unfold,
I know what it is, answer fits like glove,
It envelopes the sky each evening, loud and bold.
Butterflies in the stomach, happiness in the air,
Isn’t that how you felt when we first met?
Breathing in tranquility, free of all care,
What else is love, if not sunset?
OMG…. I’m speechless… beautifully captured and ever so gently released… 68 is going take some topping… but I suspect I’ll be surprised, again…. phoar… I even stopped watching the footy lol lol… gobsmacked
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Ayeee! That is such a warm reaction. Thank you thank you so much! I don’t write poems or odes much so was skeptical but you have really made all my worries go away! So glad.
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psst…. I have found that by sharing the sentiments of your Ode to Sunsets with a dear friend of mine to find that we have butterflies going on too… always when youleast expect it, eh? So deeply in your debt now… and happy
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Reblogged this on MiddleoftheHeart and commented:
so beautifully captured and ever so gently released…..
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Thank you so much!!!
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Aww. This is beautifully penned, Pooja. I loved it 😍❤️🤗
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Thank you so much 😍😍 I am on cloud nine!
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You deserve the praise, my dear ❤️
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i would not know
and that too is so
sad and mad
was i
til i quit
and now
i do not miss it at all
whatever the hell it is anyways~
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Nice.
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waaaaaaaaaasup?
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Can you give me writing lessons? You magic every time you write! I find it so amazing. Love your writings. Here’s a little heart from me ❤
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Hahahah. You are tooo kind. I tried something new, glad you liked it. You are a wonderful writer yourself!!!
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I like all your writings!! And thanks for the compliment 😊😊 ❤
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This is so beautifully written ❤ 💖
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Aiyyoo. Thank you Vani, means the most!!!! 🙂
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Good freakin gracious Pooja!! This is complete and utter awesomeness!
I felt it!
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Whaaaaaat. Hiiii. How are you? Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked it. I am not much into writing these so just testing the waters!!
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You ma’am are a poet!!
You left me wanting more!
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Ahhhh that makes me happppy! I am motivated to pen more of these ^_^
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I’m motivated to read 🙂
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Well, Pooja, like everyone else, I am thrilled to find this wonderfully crafted and delivered poem in my reader today. It is absolutely beautiful, my friend. The words dance along the page and right into our hearts. ❤️
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Ahhh jeff, such a beautiful way to compliment! Thank you so much friend! I hope I grow into writing more of these :))
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“Love paints the sky anew each evening… That’s so lovely and true ✅💕
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it 🤍
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Super super amazingggggg
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Thankoooo golu!
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You do Sunsets justice, they attract beauty.
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That’s the best comment I could read, all I wanted to do was make sunsets look beautiful. Thank you so much!!
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What else is love, if not sunset?
EXACTLY. ✨
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I am glad you can relate and agree ❤
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[…] Ode to sunsets! […]
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Thank you!!
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This was beautiful, and you are such a writer. ❤️
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Thank you sooooo much 🙂 means a lot coming from you!!
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You’re so welcome.
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